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    CANVAS

    There in the dark night
    No shine of star light
    I can’t feel us anymore
    Something has moved you
    Now I see straight through
    You can’t love me like before

    Look away now
    Look away
    Look away my sweet girl

    Your heart was yearning
    I tried
    My heart was burning
    Yes I tried
    How did these different worlds collide?
    Something has moved you
    Now I see straight through
    To inside
    And I died

    Look away now
    Look away
    Look away my sweet girl

    There in the sunlight
    You with your new sight
    Use your own colors
    To paint your bright skies
    Your canvas is waiting
    No hesitating
    My sun is setting
    In your eyes

    Yes I love you
    Always will love you
    Always will love you

    Goodbye

    RDS
    THE SECOND


  • #2
    Very beautiful TS. I especially liked my sun is setting in your eyes.

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      I humbly take a bow. Thank you! ATL

  • #3
    Sometime, when we set something free - it returns anyway - all on its own. The action of your word choices echoes that type of self-sacrificial freeing, to my ear. Lovely sentiment, TS.

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    • The second
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      Thank you WLR for your word of encouragement

  • #4
    Lovely, TS. A sad yet beautiful good-bye. It has a lyrical quality to it as well.

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      Yes It is A sad Lyric actually Thankyou!
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