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    Not that we often did
    But once
    We made the darkness electric
    With quiet lightning
    As our bodies
    Explored what was possible
    To feel
    In one brief hallowed time
    Together


  • #2
    This is quite emotive, romantic and effective despite its brevity. Or should I say, because of its brevity.

    Succinct eloquence is one of the many talents, in your literary tool kit.

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    • #3
      DWAYNE, Your inspiration keeps me at the grindwheel / anvil working into the wee hours trying to fashion decent poems. I always think the last one is my last, but you give me hope!

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      • #4
        You have quite a touch with words, Tanner! A lot of feeling in those few you used.

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        • #5
          The gift of human sexuality is amazing when used in line with its purpose. You've captured a bit of that here Tanner - kudos.

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