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    A treble
    Of pebbles
    For leveling out

    And stable
    A table
    That sits on our grout

    And a pair
    Of nice chairs
    For having a chat

    Sittin’,
    Bullshittin’,
    And chewing the fat

    Songin’
    All night long
    Like we did way back when

    Til dawn
    We go on
    A couple old friends

    A nice place
    To erase
    The stress from your bones

    With a treble
    Of pebbles
    A handful of stones



  • #2
    This was warm and inviting. Nicely done.

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    • #3
      Thanks!

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      • #4
        It progresses nicely and I like the repetition of the final stanza especially the link to "stones"

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        • #5
          This is a delightfully witty, reminiscent piece!

          Well Done!

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