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    FEBRUARY IS STRETCHING

    January ate the fall
    And December’s holiday hall
    Newborn mouth screams
    Homeless month, scourged with bitter cold
    Nobody wants you with your long face and frozen cheeks
    They want February’s reputation
    Teetering on a frustrating seesaw
    Humped from behind by resolutions mistakes
    Stretching a short neck to lick the season of spring
    Bending forward to break open rose red hearts
    Rip the white stitches seamed by winter
    Lay in the blue green comfort of nakedness

    RDS
    THE SECOND


  • #2
    I like how you went season through season. Nicely done TS.

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    • The second
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      Thanks much ATL

  • #3
    Teetering on a frustrating seesaw. Yup, that line sealed the deal for me. Nice TS

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    • #4
      Thank you BDB

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      • #5
        Graphic. I wonder what the calendar illustrations for this would look like? Not sure I could handle it.

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          Thank you R Loving Writer! I think graphically just walk into any store pre holliday or season and it's all on display except for the seesaw there would be no picture of frustration only children smiling
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