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    A moment


    Your smile disarmed me and caught me off guard
    Suspicious wounds, callous and dismissive,
    responded to your juvenile flirtation
    Man child, your innocence was refreshing


    Beautiful man I wanted to capture you
    Outline your very essence with my heart
    The way your smile reflected me in your eyes
    I was happy to drown in your kisses and your touch


    And for a moment I saw myself melting,
    slowly into you, becoming one
    My youth you elicited and I heard
    the sound of your voice longing for me
    But this moment past......,,


    A dream of youthful days-this illusion evaporated
    Secure reality quickly returned and
    my world was safe again
    Last edited by AlexandratheLate; 01-23-2018, 04:13 AM.

  • #2
    AlexandratheLate This is actually a very lovely piece! I wish someone wrote a poem like this about me! Lol!

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    • #3
      Thank you very much RB for your kind comment.
      Last edited by AlexandratheLate; 01-24-2018, 04:20 PM.

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      • #4
        Maybe I should have called this a fleeting thought. My girlfriend who’s 60 was flirting with a man 30 I think and I wrote how she explained her feelings to me. Guess she ain’t dead yet lol.

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        • #5
          This is a fascinating piece and apart from its subject ie the man, it is an expression of your beautiful .character and femininity.

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          • AlexandratheLate
            AlexandratheLate commented
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            Thank you very much algernon for the beautiful compliment.

        • #6
          You write deep emotion, passion so well!

          To project intimacy in the written form is not easy, but you really excel at it!

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          • AlexandratheLate
            AlexandratheLate commented
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            Thank you very much Dwayne. I really appreciate it.

        • #7
          Thank you very much TonySP for the like.

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          • #8
            Thank you for the like TC.

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            • #9
              Awww, and I thought this was a biographical piece Alex. (From your picture you seem pretty young - the guy would have had to be a teenager!)

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              • AlexandratheLate
                AlexandratheLate commented
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                Lol lol Paula. I’m blessed but I am older than I look and I find my life is enriched by friends of all ages. This friend is quite a bit older than me so I hope I did her feelings Justice.

            • #10
              Hello AlexandratheLate, A momentous moment indeed: romantic, sensuous, arousing and then the damned illusion evaporated. Reality can be so cruel. When it comes to romantic poetry, how you grasp the reader is blissfully achieved. I was engrossed. Fond regards, Tony.

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              • #11
                Thank you very much Tony. I really appreciate your comments

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                • #12
                  Romance is ageless and you capture well the romance in the moments, AtL!

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                • #13
                  Thank you very much SG for the like.

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