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  • I love You But Not Today

    I LOVE YOU BUT NOT TODAY

    I love you
    but not Today
    I really loved you
    Yesterday
    Yesterday
    You were nice and sweet
    You rubbed my thighs
    my legs ------ and feet
    But Yesterday
    has gone away
    And now I'm stuck
    with You ----- Today
    You say mean things
    that aren't true
    And that's not all
    you like to do
    You cut me down
    You make me frown
    And then you stand there
    in your gown
    You start to cry
    I scream and shout
    Sometimes I wish
    I could punch you out
    Then all of sudden
    you start to laugh
    You invite me in
    to take a bath
    We get naked
    Hop in the tub
    You give my back
    a gentle rub
    You start to push
    I start to shove
    We all soapy
    makin' love
    We together
    All alone
    No one to hear us
    scream and moan
    We keep going
    until we can't
    We just sit there
    rest and pant
    And ------ after I've performed
    my manly task
    "Do you love me?"
    is what you ask
    I get up
    and walk away
    And think about
    just what to say
    My true feelings
    I can't deny
    And my heart
    won't let me lie
    I start to smile
    that's when I say,
    "Yes ---- I love you . . .
    but not Today."

  • #2
    Honesty is the best policy - right?

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    • Rhymeboy
      Rhymeboy commented
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      That's what they say! Lol! But I say . . . only if it doesn't get you killed!

  • #3
    OMG I love this!!!

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    • Rhymeboy
      Rhymeboy commented
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      Thank you very much Linda Winkie! I appreciate you taking the time to read my work! By the way Welcome to the Zone!

  • #4
    What a well-crafted, descriptive, poignant rhyme.

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    • #5
      I liked the honesty in this.

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      • #6
        Thank you DWAYNE and AlexandratheLate I performed this at a Slam Poetry event in California a couple of years back! It won a 100 dollar prize! People thought I was writing about my life . . . I wish my life was that complicated! But I just made it up specifically for the contest! Lol!
        Last edited by Rhymeboy; 01-12-2018, 06:54 PM.

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