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  • A Summer Place(Revised)

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    Last edited by wkamen; 01-20-2018, 01:16 PM.

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    "Strange how a song sounds like a memory" What a perfect line. For me, it is "The Summer Knows" from The Summer of 42. That singular moment in time that changed our forever lives.

    What a perfect verse and as the song says "Thanks for the memories."

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    • #3
      Thanks for looking in rhymetime

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      • #4
        see Below
        Last edited by wkamen; 01-20-2018, 08:09 PM.

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        • #5
          Thanks for looking in

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          • #6
            A Summer Place(Unstructured)




            Summer was gone, fall was in full color

            I Woke up to the sound of a cold rain

            wrapped in a memory as tears grip my face

            like raindrops hugging the window pane

            I think about that song,a summer place

            and picture you and me on that beach




            I remember when I first saw you

            Swayin’ to the rhythm of the waves

            On that lonely stretch of beach.

            I walked up to you,looked into your eyes,

            You said hi and in that moment,I was captured

            I found a love for me hidden on a beach




            I remember walking together

            Barefoot in the sand,hand in hand

            We stopped at the water’s edge

            The soft sensuous touch of the breeze

            embraced us and we had our first dance

            listening to the song a summer place




            Every time I hear that song

            I picture you and me on that beach

            Strange how a song sounds like a memory

            Like a recording of a summer’s day

            Somewhere, somewhere only we know.




            I remember when we were sitting

            On that lonely shore, the sun dipping

            Into the sea, the scent of Jasmine

            Filling our senses, turning us on,

            And we kissed. In that moment

            We knew we belonged together




            I didn’t want this day to end

            I didn’t want this day to ever ever end






            Every time I hear that song

            I picture you and me on that beach

            Strange how a song sounds like a memory

            Like a recording of a summer’s day

            Somewhere, somewhere only we know.

            Somewhere, somewhere only we know.















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            • #7
              Summer was gone, fall was in full color

              I Woke up to the sound of a cold rain

              Wrapped in a memory as tears grip my face

              Like raindrops hugging the window pane

              I think about that song, a summer place

              And picture you and me on that beach




              I remember when I first saw you

              Swayin’ to the rhythm of the waves

              On that lonely stretch of beach

              I walked up to you, looked into your eyes,

              You said hi and in that moment, I was captured

              I found a love for me hidden on that beach




              I remember walking together

              Barefoot in the sand, hand in hand

              We stopped at the water’s edge

              The soft sensuous touch of the breeze

              embraced us and we had our first dance

              listening to the song a summer place




              Every time I hear that song

              I picture you and me on that beach

              Strange how a song sounds like a memory

              Like a recording of a summer’s day

              Somewhere, somewhere only we know.




              I remember when we were sitting

              On that lonely shore, the sun dipping

              Into the sea, the scent of jasmine

              Filling our senses, turning us on,

              And we kissed. In that moment

              We knew we belonged together




              I didn’t want this day to end

              I didn’t want this day to ever ever end






              Every time I hear that song

              I picture you and me on that beach

              Strange how a song sounds like a memory

              Like a recording of a summer’s day

              Somewhere, somewhere only we know.

              Somewhere, somewhere only we know.















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