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  • amenOra
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    I didn't even notice you rhymed til someone mentioned it. This was good, turns of phrases and 'meaning' presenting definitely relatable events and tendencies... Kudos-

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  • Tanner
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    Alan, I particularly loved the first stanza, especially the first 2 lines! A fabulous write!

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  • DWAYNE
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    Your flow is effortless!

    This is a profound poem, well conceived, and excellently executed!

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  • alan650
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    Everyone is too kind! I am happy to be here!!

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  • Bobby Del Boy
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    I am partial to happiness ending poems. I enjoyed the struggle and journey. Yes, welcome to the Zone, Alan.

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  • lunar glide
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    I really enjoyed the natural rhyme! Great poem

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  • RhymeLovingWriter
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    A wonderful reflection to rouse the weary and disheartened, alan650. I enjoyed your rhyme scheme as you worked your way through. Welcome to the zone!

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  • alan650
    started a topic Felicity

    Felicity

    FELICITY
    By Alan Stallsmith

    In search of felicity
    I befriended despair
    Drudging up past demons
    That I should have left there

    These memories haunt
    These insecurities roar
    Sometimes my mind
    Doesn't know what it's for

    I grasped so tight
    My hands they bled
    I slept so long
    This life's a bed

    Awaken! Awaken!
    Demand brand new!
    Take action! Take action!
    This can't always be you!

    These days haven't ended
    And the clock's hands still move
    And this life is a train
    Conducted by you

    So in meeting felicity
    I looked in the eyes of despair
    Said "Thanks for the memories.
    But I no longer live there"
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