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  • The World Described

    From birdsong observed
    Our wingless speech tries to catch
    The fluttering world
    Last edited by Tanner; 12-29-2017, 01:28 PM.

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    I am left wishing for a less judgement-tinged descriptor than 'paltry'. To my sensibility, it's something of a thud in what is an otherwise exquisite 5-7-5.

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    • #3
      G, point well taken. inserting wingless.

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      • grant hayes
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        I like 'wingless'; it sends out ripples.
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