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  • Parkinsonspoet
    started a topic Winter Morn

    Winter Morn


    A winter morn

    Blue sky and cloud

    Crown the heavens

    Day awakens




    The frost feckless

    Fades from fealty

    Wealth squandered

    Crystalline melt




    Brushed by breezes chill

    Red cheeks flourish

    Yet yearn for suns

    Heart warming gaze




    Crisp countenance

    Calmly announces

    Seasons intent

    On winter morn


  • Parkinsonspoet
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    Thank you that is great feedback

  • Parkinsonspoet
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    thank you Bobby

  • Parkinsonspoet
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    thanks Tony

  • Sister Greed
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    I love the last stanza. Glorious. You’ve really honed your writing!

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  • Bobby Del Boy
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    Nice Jon, very nice!

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  • Tony Grannell
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    Hello Parkinsonspoet, I have very much enjoyed reading this; crisp and sharp as is such a morning - one can feel the cold as one is 'brushed by breezes chill'. To-the-point language in fine poetry. Excellent. Do take care now, Tony.

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  • DWAYNE
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    This is a first rate poem.

    Brief descriptive stanzas, that convey the emotion and imagery alike.

    Great work, poet!

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  • AlexandratheLate
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    Really like the first stanza Jon. Sounds like a crisp cold morning.

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