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    Burning orange heart cement

    Hot and stuck

    One hundred percent



    Groundhog Day lament

    High class baby

    And me Ms. Low Rent

  • #2
    nice, I like the thrum of life I feel in your voice. You do it well. Opening line is ... fantastic. Tactile synesthesia and the wisp of humor at the end.
    I enjoyed these, good writing. I was captured.

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    • Johntee
      Johntee commented
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      Tactile synesthesia . . . what a great pairing of words.
      Now I'm going to have to look up what senses can be conjoint.
      Last edited by Johntee; 12-13-2017, 07:26 AM.

    • Sister Greed
      Sister Greed commented
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      Thank you for your comments, amenOra. I’m just catching up. This was inspired by your poem 3-line poem All I Know.

  • #3
    Heartburn?
    Gaviscon
    it gone.

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