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    Tuesday Afternoon

    Under booted foot,
    Inclined toward nearest rise,
    I crunched the road away
    To sister's house.

    Fading warmth of winter
    Held contentment. On the
    Wing a hungry hawk drew
    Circles​​​​ in the sky. And I

    With coat on arm, went
    Thankfully - that someone
    Knew my name and cared
    About my day - half a mile away.

  • #2
    This is so filled with love

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  • #3
    Beautiful poem and title. The love between sisters is that bond that exists when all others break away. “I crunched the road away” is such awesome imagery. What a great choice of words. That step by step determination lets the reader know an intense journey is afoot. I love reading your work RLW.

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    • RhymeLovingWriter
      RhymeLovingWriter commented
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      Thank you Sister Greed. In this particular case not a metaphor either, as we're in the country on gravel roads! Thank you for the read and supportive comments!

  • #4
    Yes to know someone cares means more than words can say.

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    • RhymeLovingWriter
      RhymeLovingWriter commented
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      I am indeed a fortunate woman in many ways. Thank you Alex. You too, have shared such beautiful, emotive work. I enjoy following you.

  • #5
    The sentiment is effectively conveyed by the diction and the vivid imagery.

    Well done, poet!

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    • RhymeLovingWriter
      RhymeLovingWriter commented
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      Thank you DWAYNE. It's all very real on this one. I'm glad the feeling came through.

  • #6
    I get it Paula. You’ve painted a vivid picture with your penbrush.

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    • RhymeLovingWriter
      RhymeLovingWriter commented
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      Thanks bobby Del Boy. Lots of inspiration at the moment with which to dabble on this canvas.

  • #7
    Inspiration
    steps to it,
    we profit
    by art's
    writ.
    Last edited by Johntee; 12-13-2017, 08:06 AM.

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    • RhymeLovingWriter
      RhymeLovingWriter commented
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      Thanks Johntee. We do indeed, particularly here in the Zone.
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