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    A seed of doubt

    Planted by a locked door

    A moments panic

    Years of disguise




    Reality shifts

    Lost in confinement

    An echo of truth

    Life undercover




    Years surrendered

    Always on the run

    Fear is the master

    Mistaken hope




    Overgrown by weeds

    The futures garden

    Open to public

    Seedy no more

  • #2
    Well done Jon! Poets on the zone are on fire

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    • Parkinsonspoet
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      thank you Alexandra

  • #3
    Interesting use of metaphor, Parkinsonspoet, and the lines are strong in their brevity.

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    • Parkinsonspoet
      Parkinsonspoet commented
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      thank you it is a very personal poem but metaphor used partly as being nonspecific readers can use own interpretations

  • #4
    I have to say, I agree with the others.

    Great work!

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  • #5
    What I see is an incredible garden of wisdom, patience, perseverance, humor, and strength...quite the bounty, given conditions.

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    • #6
      Excellent. Wow. Must read again. Brilliant. I’m in a state of admiration that you captured a human condition so fluidly yet succinctly. Great work.

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