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  • RhymeLovingWriter
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    Thanks lunar glide. I'm happy you found it so. I'm still learning and am happy to think my writing is moving in a good direction.

  • RhymeLovingWriter
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    Thank you DWAYNE. I really appreciate this encouragement.

  • lunar glide
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    This is truly one of your best!

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  • DWAYNE
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    This is my favourite poem of yours.

    Such we'll crafted stanzas, especially the second one!

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  • RhymeLovingWriter
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    Well now, Tony, that makes me feel mighty fine indeed. Thank you. Perhaps I have a future at this yet.

  • RhymeLovingWriter
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    Very true divot.

  • Tony Grannell
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    Hello RhymeLovingWriter, What then, indeed, fate and fancy to sure the chance in this uniquely exquisite verse, Most published works of late would not compare to this passage of poetic excellence, I jest you not. An intricate wonder woven with class. Fond regards, Tony.

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  • divot
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    Weather together or apart, storm clouds will always mess with the internet.

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  • RhymeLovingWriter
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    Thanks Alex.

  • AlexandratheLate
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    Missed you Paula. Really enjoyed the descriptive word choices.

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  • RhymeLovingWriter
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    Hope you are all well poet friends. Working with limited internet capability at the moment. Thinking of you often in these days.

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  • RhymeLovingWriter
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    What Then?



    What Then?​​​​​​


    lovers, born on day
    of pied repentance,
    never knew if chance
    forsook their fate or
    fancy mused her way
    into the mix

    where once betwixt
    prevenient fury, ages
    passed with notches on
    the rind, no ground or
    gritted teeth could
    masticate a mend

    it had to end, if
    not by choice
    then sure by chance

    loose ends abounded
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