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    ...that huddled stars
    -quickest things in the night
    heaped in constellations-
    joyfully postpone dawn
    to peer down isolated.

    to love so much
    that she looks after us
    as closely as a nursing mother
    handling us carefully by our hearts
    to dip us in tepid light and meditations
    no one is permitted to see

    so much
    that if sunrise that drowsy legislator
    would not grope
    and push our hearts in
    they would dribble out...
    Last edited by lunar glide; 12-08-2017, 06:40 PM.

  • #2
    Wow LG. Quite beautiful. Keep them coming.

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      Thank you ATL

  • #3
    ah, the love is felt!

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    • lunar glide
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      Im glad you said so! Thank you

  • #4
    10,000 likes!

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    • lunar glide
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      Thank you Bobby!

  • #5
    Hello lunar glide, You write of such a tender light and do so, so beautifully. One treads delicately through such a poem for fear of cracking the light. A most beautiful poem, indeed. Fond regards, Tony.

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    • #6
      Thank you so much for a beautiful compliment!

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      • #7
        This is an exquisitely beautiful poem.

        I was going to emphasize a phrase or 2, but really, the whole poem is intoxicating!

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        • lunar glide
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          Wow. Thank you DWAYNE!
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