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    Stained love

    Flickering lights through a misty curtain of gauze
    Enveloped in so many translucent folds
    Frosty air moving in and whipping at my face
    stinging my cheeks, leaving a well defined trace


    constricted heavy chest making it hard to breathe
    Cold fog distorting all memories in my mind
    Wildfire spreading deliberately through all my veins
    The love i thought i had was just a darkened stain


  • #2
    Can feel the heaviness of sorrow; great writing, A.!

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    • AlexandratheLate
      AlexandratheLate commented
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      Thank you very much Katray.

  • #3
    THAT ending is extremely powerful!

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  • #4
    Metaphorically and painfully accomplished write. Applause through tears.

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    • AlexandratheLate
      AlexandratheLate commented
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      Awww. Thank you very much Bobby.

  • #5
    Heart-wrenching.

    A blunt articulation of pain.

    Excellent.

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    • #6
      Thank you very much Dwayne.

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