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    Broken
    That one said he hated me
    Ran away with the key
    Little did I know
    His goal was to steal my heart, Although
    He failed the test
    Yet,
    He came close
    But I chose
    Him
    Filled my heart to the brim
    Healed the break but cracked it more
    Heart so sore
    Forgive my ignorance

    Last edited by Bryana Cronk; 12-11-2017, 06:06 AM.

  • #2
    Sometimes we pick the wrong people. Nicely conveyed here. Welcome to the Zone.

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    • Bryana Cronk
      Bryana Cronk commented
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      Thank you so very much, The atmosphere here is beautiful and thank you for the like you have no idea how much it means.

  • #3
    Welcome... Lovely poem. But .. He failed the test, and you chose 'him' meaning another more suitable person?

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    • Bryana Cronk
      Bryana Cronk commented
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      Yes, It is, Originally I had put a name but then for privacy reasons edited it out
      And thank you
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