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  • Cut and Paste

    Cut and paste

    The vodka I chased

    A bitter taste

    Love misplaced

    When what I wanted

    Was to be embraced

    By your mouth

    And your aftertaste

    Our tongues interlaced




    Too fast-paced?

    You lay me to waste

    A hot lambaste

    And I’ll pretend

    My hands on your waist

    My face you traced

    Our breathing in haste

    And I’ll pretend

    That we can be ‘just friends’










  • #2
    Hello Sister Greed, In the cover of pretence, 'just friends', a sure excuse for hitting the vodka and the unwelcomed sufferance of a hangover and the aftertaste of reality. Your pining pen weeps splendid poetry with honesty, sadness and natural flare. I have enjoyed reading this poem, very much so. Well done, indeed. Do take care now, Tony.

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    • Sister Greed
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      Thanks, Tony. Your comments are gratefully received. I’m glad you enjoyed Cut and Paste.

  • #3
    Sister Greed, it has been a while since you graced the forum; I have missed your distinctive style and wonderful poetic sensibility. This terse, nicely metered piece captures desire with authentic vigour. I doff my hat.

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    • Sister Greed
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      You’re always too kind Grant. Cut And Paste will most likely get a rewrite!
      Last edited by Sister Greed; 11-29-2017, 07:49 AM. Reason: Autocorrect malfunction. Ugh.

  • #4
    She's back! Yea! I echo Grant - it's good to see your name in the queue Sister Greed !

    After this kind of steamy encounter one would have to be some kind of actress to pretend to be 'just friends'.

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    • Sister Greed
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      RLW, thank you so much for your welcome!!! Check out Pink Universe and Lust for life. I warmed up a bit! Looking forward to reading you...

  • #5
    SG, Back Again, with cutting edge sensuality - No, You always "pushed the envelope" with a chain saw of brilliance, laying waste to pretence and cultural norms.

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    • #6
      Sister greed have missed your unique style. Welcome back !!

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      • Sister Greed
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        Thank you AlexandraTheGREAT! I missed you guys! PS I see we wrote on a similar topic...must be in the air.

    • #7
      Thanks everybody! It’s great to be back! Look forward to sharing our pains and pleasures. Just warming up!!!

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      • #8
        Phew! Love it - bring it on.

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        • Sister Greed
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          Phew is right! Thank you for your comment!

      • #9
        Like I always say, rhymin is poetry. Yippee ki aye

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        • Sister Greed
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          RITS, yeah I kind of hate the rhyming. It’s going to be reworked.
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