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    THE MOON CROSSED OVER

    The moon crossed over
    Watched our lovely fire
    Did not shy from our nakedness
    Or our shroud
    Six lights of divine power
    Sky and earth
    Sun and spirit
    Ocean and fire
    We danced above , beneath and between
    Stones with eyes
    Embracing our race

    The moon bled tears of silver joy
    With the birth of the sun
    Shouts, you make me shine
    In the black night
    See me, I exist

    RDS
    THE SECOND





  • #2
    This is wonderful, The second!

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      many thanks M

  • #3
    Powerful lyricism, assembling the elemental powers to bear witness.

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    • The second
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      Thank you grant

  • #4
    Very romantic theSecond. Love the flow and your word choices.

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    • The second
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      Thank you A !

  • #5
    Hello The second, Between the physical and the spiritual in, 'the moon bled tears of silver joy', you render forth most beautifully. Sublimely splendid in all. Do take care now, Tony.

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    • The second
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      Thank you TG

  • #6
    Overflowing with life. Love it!

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    • The second
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      Thanks to LG!

  • #7
    Superb to the final existence

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    • The second
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      Thank You RIS

  • #8
    I really like this one TS. It covers and expands me all at the same time. Bravo!

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    • The second
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      many thanks RLw

  • #9
    the ending really did it
    thank you for sharing...

    the different contrasting features
    worked well together.

    it reminds me of
    the alchemical operation...

    nature reveals her
    secrets ...

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    • The second
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      Thank you and amen

  • #10
    Beautiful, romantic and powerful; I love it. Thank you for sharing.

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    • The second
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      Welcome and thank you mooneyblack
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