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    The interruption

    When I first saw you,
    time seemed to stop
    As your eyes locked on to mine
    Sounds became hazy and far
    And for what seemed an eternity,
    we were all alone

    Startled out of this dream
    By an unwanted interruption
    Reality rudely came back unannounced
    Quickly shattering this glassy mist
    Leaving my heart pounding as a naked shore
    is pummeled by the waves of the sea


  • #2
    Quick Alexandra,go back to sleep the dreamโ€™s not over!
    I think we all know the feeling. Well depicted, friend.

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  • #3
    A moment of splendor shattered by realityโ€™s intrusion, leaving a wobble in its wake. Lovely depiction, AtL!

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    • AlexandratheLate
      AlexandratheLate commented
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      Thank you very much Mutaddo. I was hoping i did it justice.

  • #4
    Hello AlexandratheLate, The accursed interruption and pummelled into reality- a rude awakening personified in this, another most enjoyable poem of yours. Excellent (as always). Fond regards, Tony.

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    • #5
      Thank you very much Tony. I really appreciate it.

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      • #6
        I agree we all know this kind of feeling in our life one time or another

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        • AlexandratheLate
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          Thank you TonySP. I really appreciate it.

      • #7
        This is quite the encounter AtL! One wonders how to survive at all when the earth has been shaken so?

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        • #8
          So true Paula. But many of us have. ๐Ÿ˜Š

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          • #9
            Earth shattering and so well conveyed.

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            • #10
              Thank you very much Mooneyblack. I really appreciate it.

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