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    Regrets

    Longing glances

    life diminished to a whisper

    Muffled echos

    Silenced voices, gone the laughter




    Lyrical sounds

    Carefree days replaced by weeping

    Painful groaning

    Grasping the winds of yesterday







  • #2
    Your word choices and phrasing do a masterful job of capturing the feel of 'Regrets' here AtL.

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    • #3
      Thank you very much Paula. I appreciate it.

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      • #4
        Thank you for the like TC.

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        • #5
          "Non Rien de Rien"
          The Little Sparrow
          calls again,
          Edith Piaff's
          life of pain
          Last edited by Johntee; 11-14-2017, 11:13 AM.

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          • AlexandratheLate
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            Thank you very much Johntee.

        • #6
          This is seriously wistfully emotive.

          The brevity is punctuating!

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          • AlexandratheLate
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            Thank you so much Dwayne. It means a lot.

        • #7
          The feels like the death throes of a relationship; very emotive. Thank you.

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          • #8
            Thank you Mooneyblack for reading, connecting and commenting. I really appreciate it.

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            • #9
              Very well put together, AtL! You used this form well to poetically blend both little and big regrets and how they make one feel.

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              • #10
                Thank you very much Mutaddo.

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                • #11
                  Nicely done! 'Short and Deep' I especially like the line: 'Grasping the winds of yesterday'

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                • #12
                  I love the content with respect to word choice in expressing regrets and the flow of the words. Wonderful!!!!!!!!

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                  • #13
                    Thank you very much wkamen.

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