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  • Safety in America - # 2 Haiku

    Once heated words, fists
    Or knife - But today you aim
    Cold steel with large clips

    You get to live out
    Your First Person Shooter Game
    Body count in blood

    Who should be blamed for
    These slaughters of innocents?
    The deranged shooter?

    American as
    Apple Pie, the glitter of
    So many choices


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  • #2
    the discussion on your previous post safety in America prompted my own over a barrel so thank you for your part in that. This one ses a string of 4 haiku to make the point and it works very wellThe form suits the message
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    • #3
      Pp, Thank you for your visit and comments. I don't know what event/actions it will take to finally steep the Good Ship America in a better direction.

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      • #4
        Nice!

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