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    • Spring ahead
    • fall back
      Stay in Bed
      sky's black
      Winter dread?
      energy lack
      Dark instead
      vitamin hack
      Flowers dead
      rhythm wack
      Clock misread
      panic attack
      Dusk has fled
      train's off track
      Spring's ahead
      winter's back

  • #2
    This sums the morning up nicely Bobby! Although with the sun shining now - I'm pretending not to notice.

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    • Bobby Del Boy
      Bobby Del Boy commented
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      Thank you for engaging Paula. NY energy today was a roller coaster for some with the NY Marathon and the whole "fall back" phenom.

  • #3
    Lol

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    • #4
      I like the way you use short lines, Bobby. You pack a lot of interest into the quickstep pace; I particularly like 'vitamin hack' and 'rhythm wack'.

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      • #5
        grant hayes I thank you and noticed you are killing it (in a good way) with your analysis across the zone. A great way to end the week here in the Zone. Thanks for stopping by.

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        • #6
          Bobby, this is a fabulous poem!, especially for those with Seasonal Affective Disorder. I particularly love the lines
          energy lack
          Dark instead


          Your tonic may help me get to sleep in a few minutes, with a smile in my brain.

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          • #7
            Pleasant dreams Tanner!

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            • #8
              Nice and sharp, Bobby! I haven’t set my car clock yet because I still like to think the darkness is later.

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              • #9
                Bobby nicely done I enjoyed this made me smile- grant hayes be careful who you tell you like rhythm whack you might end up with bruises

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                • #10
                  Muttado1sb Parkinsonspoet thanks guys, glad you enjoyed.

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                  • #11
                    I love this succinct delivery - so well executed, thank you.

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