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    The mercury
    will start to dip
    leading the trees
    to start to drip
    their colored leaves
    while candy thieves
    explore for more

  • #2
    Oh I LIKE the visual this paints in my brain! Excellent!

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    • Muttado1sb
      Muttado1sb commented
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      Thank you, RLW! I’m glad you enjoyed the visual. This form still works for me.

  • #3
    Well done poet!!

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    • Muttado1sb
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      Thank you, AtL! I’m glad you enjoyed it.

  • #4
    Autumn beautifully painted with your penbrush Muttado!

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    • #5
      Thank you, Bobby! I’m glad you liked the painting.

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      • #6
        The ol' seven line special, adeptly delivered with wit and music by the master. A seasonal gem, Muttado.

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        • #7
          Thanks, grant! I’m happy you found it a gem for the season even though it is the opposite season of yours.

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          • grant hayes
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            The whole Halloween thing is becoming more popular here; it never used to be as big a deal here as in the US.

          • Muttado1sb
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            Well, what child can resist a candy crawl? And many adults like the chance to disguise themselves and act the fool. I’m not surprised it’s catching on there. At least it’s spring, there, when the original All Hallows Day and it’s associated Even was celebrated. Happy Samhain!

        • #8
          The more I read this, the more I like it.

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          • Muttado1sb
            Muttado1sb commented
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            Thanks, RLW! It was quick to write but I really like how it came out, so I’m glad you are enjoying it!

        • #9
          Sweetly short
          to hit the mark.

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          • #10
            A special treat in rotting leafs. Poetry so much grander than science.

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