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    Reflection on Water

    The canvas ripples
    making clouds shimmy and shake
    among the lilies

    ——

    A Good Story

    Why I stay up late
    when dreams should be my focus
    credits the author

    ——

    Paradise

    Dreams are well and good
    but remember paradise
    is where you make it

    ——

    Happiest

    Sometimes in your life
    you're happiest when there is
    nothing to report

    ——

    Top of the World

    The top of the world
    is defined by the angle
    from which it is viewed

    ——

    Morning Miracle

    I awake smiling
    grateful for the miracle
    morning's sun proclaims

    ——

    Falling

    Under the bright sun
    while I work through my schedule
    the leaves are falling
    Last edited by Muttado1sb; 11-05-2017, 09:20 PM.

  • #2
    Splendid! Each entity a treasure unto themselves

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      Muttado1sb commented
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      Thanks, Bobby! Mostly fool’s gold, but I enjoyed them.

  • #3
    Lovely Haiku, a plenitude of wisdom here. I particularly like the subtlety of "Falling" - Man in the world at work, while Nature does its own business without fail: Natura Naturans

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      Thanks, Tanner! I’m glad you think them words of wisdom. Falling came from me seeing how much I miss being at work. Walking through the fallen leaves going to or from the office just brought that to the fore.

  • #4
    Come upon lately,
    Lilies speak of Giverny.
    Art bound by Monet.

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    • Muttado1sb
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      Thank you, Johntee! Wonderful haiku of your own. These particular lilies speak of Carroll Creek Park in Frederick, MD.

  • #5
    So many of these ring true - in thinking back - in hoping forward. You have a gift for capturing the moments in beautiful ways.

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      Thank you, RLW! Sometimes the moments capture themselves. I'm glad you think they can be beautiful.

  • #6
    My favorite is the morning miracle. These are lovely Mutaddo.

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      Thank you, AtL! Every morning is another miracle. I'm glad you found them lovely.
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