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    360

    It doesn’t seem fair
    It doesn’t feel right
    It doesn’t breathe air
    It doesn’t need light

    It makes its own rules
    and uses no tools
    It’s yin and the yang
    and a boomerang

    An endless knot
    A thickening plot
    A blooming lotus
    We fail to notice


    © Worthy Poetry


  • #2
    The words are great, and I enjoyed how they go together, micworthy! But I don’t get the reference to 360. I imagine a circle, an endless loop, but that doesn’t fit all the lines. I do really like your last two lines, though, even if I don’t see how a lotus and 360 relate.

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    • #3
      Originally posted by Muttado1sb View Post
      I don’t get the reference to 360.

      Well, it's called "karma".

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