Separating

[AlexandratheLate]

Separating

Dreams of masked figures dancing under dim lights

Fluttering swollen eyes trying to awaken

Hooded capes swaying under star stippled
black velvet skies

Suffocating from the wounds inflicted by a lover

As life’s water, tears drip from a broken vase

Unable to prevent a couple from separating
like a picture torn in two

Helpless flower cannot thrive and wilts in sadness

[amenOra]

Nicely done, really enjoyed this the structure and the very succinct beautiful descriptions. A very keen look into your mind ... or perhaps anyones.. very good use of metaphor... kudos A.!--

[AlexandratheLate]

Thank you very much amenOra. Trying different styles other than my favorite which is sonnets.

[DWAYNE]

Eloquent description of detachment.

[AlexandratheLate]

Thank you very much Dwayne. I always appreciate your comments.

[Parkinsonspoet]

well written but sad truth

[AlexandratheLate]

Thank you very much Jon.

[AlexandratheLate]

Thank you very much for the like Mutaddo.

[AlexandratheLate]

Thank you for the like Darth. I really appreciate it.