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    SHOOTING STARS IN LIGHT

    Here we go again
    Beautiful girl, I don’t know how
    Lips so fragrant
    Eyes so inviting
    No voice, that's the enticement
    The completion of enchantment
    Laying under the perseid shower
    Another unknown
    I confess the act
    I can’t redeem the act
    I polish the behavior
    Tarnish my own life with you
    I give nothing away
    Sell not a note for tit tat
    Still I lack

    Nothing has been promised to me by God
    Nothing except my dreams

    Be tight
    Be pleasure
    Be real
    Be foreboding
    Wake me in the earliest part of the day
    Sweet and uncomfortable
    Time is spent alive

    RDS
    THE SECOND


  • #2
    Time is spent alive, indeed. I could feel the life in every line of this.

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    • #3
      Thank you Grant!!! Where are the other mothers of the poetic universe????????????????????????????????????

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      • Muttado1sb
        Muttado1sb commented
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        ‘Mothers of the Poetic Universe’ sounds like a great title or maybe band name. :-)

    • #4
      I feel the electricity in your words TS. I look forward to your poems like the hairs on a cats back
      Last edited by lunar glide; 10-18-2017, 10:00 AM.

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      • #5
        Very well done, the second! No promises, yet many demands. Spend your time wisely.

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