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    BLOOM

    Come all you beautiful poets
    Share the glaze of your stigmas and stamens
    I want to suck the nectar
    Your Honeysuckle pens
    Eat the cedar walls of closets
    To reveal the skeletons
    Slipping off the graphite shelves
    Plant the scent of shame or jasmine in my mind
    Keep my feet from the quicksand
    Send me cut flowers
    From funerals and weddings
    From shores of storms
    Forests of fires
    Drenched and burned
    Send me to times of gathering
    With thorns dipped in rose blood
    Tattoo your yearnings onto my heart
    Open the instruments of my gate
    Make me smell the colors of the flowering moon
    Same as the night Primrose
    So I can accept
    Presque sombre de la nuit
    Les derniers jours de chaleur
    Et bloom

    RDS
    THE SECOND

  • #2
    How nicely autumnal
    the last three lines
    turn

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    • The second
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      many thanks JT

  • #3
    wow TS you are an inspiration with this one.

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    • The second
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      Its just what it is Thank you LG

  • #4
    The second, this could be the keynote poem for the Zone. Your poetical powers and appeal are in full flow here, and the flourish of the final lines is masterfully moving. As far as I'm concerned, you are a true poet, and I am lucky to read your work.

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    • The second
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      Many Thanks to you are not enough!!!! The luck is all mine!!!!

  • #5
    Hello The second, This is just outstanding. What you desire of poets is most splendid but how you express your desires is superlative poetry. I must say, you do have class, crystal class,a rare gem. Do take care, Tony

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    • The second
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      Tony You are a grand Writer and I thank You for your care
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