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    Mothers' Milk

    As mothers milk, you comfort me at night
    I've gazed upon your ethereal face
    Fondled by halos of celestial light
    Enraptured by your beautiful embrace


    Like a shooting star twinkles and flashes
    And the moon turns pink at loves first blushing
    Without your love, I would turn to ashes
    Carried off by the wind into nothing
    Last edited by AlexandratheLate; 08-27-2017, 10:20 AM.

  • #2
    'Without your love, I would turn to ashes / Carried off by the wind into nothing' Lovely, AtL!

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    • AlexandratheLate
      AlexandratheLate commented
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      Thank you very much Mutaddo for reading and commenting.

  • #3
    Your words have a 'floating' quality to my ear AtL. May I ask what inspired this?

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    • AlexandratheLate
      AlexandratheLate commented
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      Thank you very much Paula for reading and commenting. As for the inspiration: I've witnessed love that is so strong, so enduring among humans that it's almost God-like and I wish I could say I have experienced that in a romantic relationship -- but I have experienced that with my mother and my son who love me deeply and I them as well as my personal relationship with my God. Long answer but that kind of love is beautiful to witness. It warms my heart that people can love that way.

    • RhymeLovingWriter
      RhymeLovingWriter commented
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      That's beautiful Alex. It warms my heart too.

  • #4
    Thank you for the like.

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    • #5
      oh my ATL. the last lines are for the ages!

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      • AlexandratheLate
        AlexandratheLate commented
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        Thank you very much Lunar for such a beautiful comment.

    • #6
      Let's all flood the zone with Love poems. This is a beautiful poem and a great start Alexandra!

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      • #7
        Thank you very much Bobby my friend. We need more love in this world.

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        • #8
          Thank you very much for the like TC.

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          • #9
            AlexandratheLate I especially like the ending! It's like butter! A truly lovely poem!

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            • #10
              Thank you very much Rhymeboy for a beautiful comment.

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              • #11
                Beautiful expression of passion.

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                • #12
                  Thank you so much Dwayne for reading and commenting.

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                  • #13
                    Thank you very much for the like DM. 😊

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                    • #14
                      Thank you for the like

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