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  • Tremble and Flare

    A tremble in the sky
    preceded by a flare
    a frisson from on high
    a warning to beware

    The light and then the dark
    a window rattling roar
    and as it became stark
    the clouds began to pour

    I sat inside entranced
    my mind filled with wonder
    enthralled as lightning danced
    enchanted by thunder

  • #2
    Beautiful depiction! I can see it!

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    • Muttado1sb
      Muttado1sb commented
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      Thanks, RLW! We've had a few storms come through the past week, including a good one today that helped me finish this.

  • #3
    The wonder and power of nature well reflected here

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    • Muttado1sb
      Muttado1sb commented
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      Thanks, Parkinsonspoet! There is lots to wonder.

  • #4
    Awesome display Muttado!

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    • #5
      Thanks, Bobby! A good thunderstorm is awesome to watch.

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      • #6
        Great imagery - your words perfectly pictured the storm in all its glory and power.

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        • Muttado1sb
          Muttado1sb commented
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          Thank you, AtL! I do enjoy watching a good storm.

      • #7
        Nature's fireworks so aptly depicted; thank you.

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        • Muttado1sb
          Muttado1sb commented
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          Thank you, mooneyblack! Nature can put on some of the best fireworks shows.
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