has yellow ever called to you

[Suz-zen]

has yellow ever
called to you
clearly spoken out your name
you walked along
a street
open markets
bustling stares
a smell here savory
a succulent taste there
when the daffodils
the daffodils in April
as you succumb
to their color
sing till June
bitter taste of coffee
sharp desert plants
chase you weary to
honey from a narrow path
where sun witnesses
rings of marigold
clear timbre pure
regally shining
go for it
grab it
get some my friend
glory is calling
hear your name
sail away
on the light
of this day.

[RhymeLovingWriter]

Upbeat tune here Suz-zen. Your reflective 'slice of life' pieces capture wisps of experiences and turn them around for perusal. It sounds like you had a good time with this one!

[Suz-zen]

With a dear friend whom I often call my ray of sunshine... blonde hair and a smile that shines.

[lunar glide]

i enjoyed the fervor you wrote this with, the wellspring that you couldnt contain came across beautifully.

[Suz-zen]

Thanks so much lunar glide. It was a day of delight!

[Bobby Del Boy]

You give us eyes to see within the blooming pollenating sunflower. I've got yellow fever now

[Suz-zen]

Bobby, the sunflower is one that makes me HAPPY!!! Take an aspirin for the fever and a cool compress!

[amenOra]

It reminded me a lot of a painting! Nice little walk through, shall I use the word "quaint"?
Pretty inspiring to me...

[Suz-zen]

I like inspiring! Much thanks, amenOra.

[Parkinsonspoet]

I love this one. As a child I used to give my mum daffodils on mothers day

[Suz-zen]

That is so sweet !!!

[lunar glide]

i love the picture of the daffodil on your book!

[Parkinsonspoet]

Thank you. My book is in part dedicated to my Mum hence the picture

[AlexandratheLate]

Suzzen this just made me feel so warm inside. I'm with Bobby. I got yellow fever too.

[Suz-zen]

Thank you ! That makes me happy !

[Johntee]

Today Yellow and Muscle Car
are neck and neck
in the views and ticks, and look
Yellow sees Glory Calling
Bright New Day

[Muttado1sb]

Ah, an homage to happy yellows. Very nice, Suz-zen! It brings forth happy yellow thoughts. Forsythias, the sign of spring. ''Yellow bird, up high in banana tree'' - Kingston Trio, ''Yellow moon, yellow moon, \ why you keep peeping in my window?'' Neville Brothers.

[Suz-zen]

Thank you for introducing me to these new yellows!! I love them all. Yellow bird in a banana tree, Forsythias, and the Neville Bros yellow moon!! Appreciate this !

[grant hayes]

I like how you've placed the line breaks here, Suz-zen - that effect whereby the logical thread moves through charged fragments, all at once, drawing in the reader with unmarked enjambment. You've communicated a happiness here that is not saccharine or trite, and it has induced me to summon up yellowness in my experience. I was transported back to the common yellow lawn-flowers that used to entrance me as an infant.

[Suz-zen]

The line breaks were something I spent a lot of time with. I played with this and moved them around and you taught me about the importance of this ! Thank you for making note of this !
A trip back to infancy perhaps crawling on the lawn? Oh grant! This image I adore !! Thank you for reading and commenting so!