Emaculate Dreadlocks

[Suz-zen]

Reworked

[Suz-zen]

Brainwreck Hi and good morning! Thank you for reading this and the like! I appreciate it.

[Brainwreck]

Though sounding sad, it becomes so lovely when I say it from my lips. I am concrete
person, so I need a little help with the last line. Not sure what it is supposed to be,
but it intrigues me to find out. A little help.

[Suz-zen]

I felt sadness

[grant hayes]

Sounds like you met God, Suz-zen. Jokes all unspoken.

[Suz-zen]

yes, grant hayes. as i walked along and days later this is how i felt. unspoken yet communicated. A hint to this was the ending of one line to the beginning of the next:
immaculate,
conceptual

Somewhat veiled..

[RhymeLovingWriter]

I thought I'd commented on this when I first read it. Basically - what Grant said.

[Johntee]

Dead Sea

Following my usual habit
I took the time to misread it
as Emasculate Dreadlocks
and waited Delilah's shears
on the Shock-Jock, fears
front till, granted Grant's insight,
(this time unknowing he put me right)
I recut the scene from Gath to Galilee.

[AlexandratheLate]

There is a beautiful sadness in this Suzzen. It touches the soul.

[Suz-zen]

AlexandratheLate Thank you for reading this and sharing your reaction. It is much the same as my experience of the inspiration.

[Johntee]

Back on the library's internet today , now I see why I misread the title as Emasculate, but Grant spotted the Immaculate intention. Soundalike but not Readalike I spent a couple of days wondering what twisted nerve in my brain was responsible for the plait.