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  • Birds Sense

    BIRD-BRAIN



    early birds get worms
    early worms become breakfast
    the Cardinal Rules




    Muttado's Come back haiku

    The Late Bird

    Sleeping in too late
    could mean no worm for breakfast
    a Cardinal Sin




    Last edited by Brainwreck; 07-08-2017, 10:11 PM. Reason: I wanted to get Muttado's come back haiku next to mine. They work well together. Thanks, Muttado

  • #2
    A perfectly BIRD-BRAIN idea!

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    • Brainwreck
      Brainwreck commented
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      Perfect, I should have made the title Bird-Brain. I think I will a little later.

  • #3
    Oh my gosh - this is PERFECT! As a moderator I can change that title for you if you really want to now Brainwreck. But I think it's fine as is.

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    • Brainwreck
      Brainwreck commented
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      Thank you. RLW. It was supposed to be Bird Sense not Birds Sense. Don't guess it matters.
      I have another problem you may be able to help me with. I posted twice and
      cannot find how to delete the one with no comments. Please delete if you can. Thanks.
      Careful about saying PERFECT in all caps, I'll get a big brain. The premature post
      "Different" was so bad I had to post something better. I am hoping that I will get a lot
      of different ideas and what is wrong. PPoet rewrote it and it was way better.

  • #4
    The Late Bird

    Sleeping in too late
    could mean no worm for breakfast
    a Cardinal Sin
    Last edited by Muttado1sb; 07-08-2017, 09:17 PM.

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    • Brainwreck
      Brainwreck commented
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      Wicked come-back haiku. It rocks. Sin. yep I love it.
      Thank you for taking time to read and pen a new haiku.
      You need a title and then post it for your poem.

    • Muttado1sb
      Muttado1sb commented
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      You're right, I forgot the title. Fixed that. But I will leave it here to pair with yours. :-)
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