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    Abandoned Hall

    Forgotten corners of my mind
    Where creatures lay, hidden in dark,
    Where whispers are still heard, and I –
    But pray for silence to succumb me whole.

    I’m lost in search trying to find
    A tiny hope, a single spark
    Of light long lost, bright light that I –
    Refuse to recognize, but play my role.

    When sins return to me in kind
    I worry not – fear of the dark
    No longer matters when I die –
    Death drains my body, not my soul.

    Forgotten long ago my mind,
    Thick, heavy clouds maintain the dark.
    Who any hope has left? – not I...
    Fade echoes in my mind – abandoned hall.


  • #2
    Quite imaginative description Anatoliy. I truly enjoyed it.

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    • #3
      Loved this.

      Especially that second to last paragraph.

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      • #4
        Thank you for your comments! I never tried this rhyming scheme before, I am glad if it worked.

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