By The Window

[lunar glide]

thank you Grant! to be durable is perhaps the ultimate test... I've missed your work recently. must catch up.

[lunar glide]

thanks Suzzen
I'm glad to be back , have alot of catching up to do..

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thank you Dwayne! your compliments mean alot to me.

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I'm glad you liked it NYsonnet. thank you!

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thank you Tony! I'm just catching up, youve posted some masterpieces lately!

[Suz-zen]

lunar glide I hold your songs
like a breeze holds flower petals



aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah yes!

[DWAYNE]

Lunar, this is a brilliantly reminiscent piece.

The whole thing!

I love the imagery and wit of the first stanza, and that last paragraph is eloquently vivid, expressive and creative.

[rhymetime]

It is interesting to me that you mentioned the birds. One of my first thoughts, as I read this, was about birds just outside the morning window singing a morning song as we begin our day. I know that is corny and very snow white but I thought of that. I suspect your mom is everywhere, give her a wink and thank her for the support

[N. Y. Sonnet]

Lunarglide, you have made magic once again! Your piece captures the music of memories... So touching!

[Tony Grannell]

Hello lunar glide, Moseying into the beautiful aromas and sounds of memories in endearing and tender poetry. It is truly lovely in all, one to linger in, in bliss. Regards, Tony.

[grant hayes]

I like the gentle wit and truth of 'for technical reasons', and the opening line 'You sing me stairways' is truly lovely. The whole piece, as I would expect from you, charms, lulls, and awakens all at once; the last stanza is as exquisite as a calligraphic stroke and as durable as fired clay.

[lunar glide]

thank you RT! different directions is right. it's a memory of my mother, her love of cooking me breakfast, and the feeling she is everywhere nowadays, especially with the birds at breakfast.

[lunar glide]

thank you Bobby! I've been thinking of you wishing a speedy recovery

[Bobby Del Boy]

Light and airy, over easy and perfectly unscrambled LG!

[rhymetime]

My mind goes in multiple directions as I read and reread your verse. "for technical reasons" hmm.
Thanks for these flights of thought