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  • 38 Thousand Feet

    We were on holiday in Jersey, Channel Islands, when we awoke to the news of the Manchester terror attack. On the plane, on our way home, I could not help but reflect on the tranquillity that existed at 38, 000 feet, heaven like, masking the turbulence below.

    38 Thousand feet

    Soft velvety islands floating on blue
    Holding no fear for me or for you
    Just calm tranquillity, peace for this moment
    To reflect on how you can offer condolence.

    For those slaughtered whilst enjoying their youth
    Innocents taken for some misplaced truth
    That perpetuates evil towards fellow man
    To kill, maim and flames of hatred fan

    Today’s news seems so unreal from up here
    I cannot see earth, only scenes that endear
    Yet the turbulent descent is a timely reminder
    Of uncomfortable truths, all whilst the kinder

    People emerge to reclaim their space
    Offering compassion and love to replace
    The evil barbarity that we must defeat
    In a world which looks better at 38 thousand feet

  • #2
    Well done.

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    • mooneyblack
      mooneyblack commented
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      Thank you, Paula

  • #3
    A touching tribute, with a call for peace. Wonderfully done.

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    • mooneyblack
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      Thank you, NY Sonnet.

  • #4
    Sad times captured at 38,000 feet. You were in the zone when you wrote this mooneyblack. Well done!

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    • mooneyblack
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      Thank you, Bobby Del Boy. It's hard to take in.

  • #5
    Well done, know easy answers.

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    • mooneyblack
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      Thank you, divot.

  • #6
    Love it well written

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    • mooneyblack
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      Thank you, Tonysp

  • #7
    Nicely done Mooneyblack.

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    • mooneyblack
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      Thank you, AlexandratheLate

  • #8
    Hello Karen, To look down at such beauty and then to alight onto the horrors of evil, heartbreaking indeed. You have composed your poem with sorrow and a poetic heart. Wonderful! Regards, Tony.

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    • mooneyblack
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      Thank you so much for such generous feedback Tony.

  • #9
    Beautiful!

    Reflective, honest, and carefully composed.

    One of your best.

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    • mooneyblack
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      Dwayne, thank you for the read and kind comments. A heartbreaking situation.

  • #10
    Heartbreakingly real

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    • mooneyblack
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      Thanks for the read and comment Suz-zen, really appreciated.
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