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    FOLLOW THE SPEAR

    Ten thousand years of love
    Or guise of love
    The darkest hair covered the color of our eyes
    Oceans and shores lead us here
    Princes and kings kept us laying in fear
    Fathers and brothers kept us fighting
    Mothers and sisters kept us being born
    Only through conception
    Hate or love lives
    Follow the sun and you also will set
    Follow the wind and you also will die
    Follow the seasons and you also will change
    Follow the stone and you also will sink in the sea
    Follow the truth and you also will be set free
    Follow love and you also will live
    Follow the spear
    And you will find a heart
    You will learn how to take
    But in taking
    You will learn how to give

    RDS
    THE SECOND

    A Native Poem



  • #2
    I really like this one! The 3 lines that stand out and I re-read immediately out loud were: Follow the seasons and you also will change
    Follow the stone and you also will sink in the sea
    Follow the truth and you also will be set free

    I am struck by the depth in my heart that the spear hit with this! Thank you The second

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    • The second
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      Quite Welcome S-Z Thank you

  • #3
    I agree.

    Deep write.

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      Thank You DWAYNE

  • #4
    Yes, simply lovely in its teaching and truth.

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    • The second
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      Thank You RLW

  • #5
    This is beautiful TS and so reminds me of the scriptures that the truth will set you free and being tossed by the wind.

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      Thank You AL

  • #6
    TS, you captured "the Native" essence,history and soul as only you can do. Well done poet friend!

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      Thank you BDB
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