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    THE CIRCLE

    Does the lilac still attract you?
    The blood rose still hold you?
    April and May can fool you
    With a breath of winter
    The guided moth sees the heat and enters
    The weight of the earth can fall away
    The living stay
    The unborn force root and climb
    And you and I know the circle
    Because we are here again

    RDS
    THE SECOND


  • #2
    This has a very 'streamy' feel to me- mysterious, romantic, yet kind of eerie too. I am drawn to it! Not sure I fully understand it, I don't have to as I am feeling it, connecting with it...Nicely done The second Bravo!

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    • The second
      The second commented
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      S-Z Thank You for your continuous likes

  • #3
    Hello The second, Rising in the vortex of summer colours into winter on the wings of a moth. The seasons of life from blue skies to shelter with the one you love. A most beautiful poem - just lovely to read. Thank you very much. Regards, Tony.

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    • #4
      Of what must a season make, not much more than this. excellent!

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      • The second
        The second commented
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        Thank you Divot

    • #5
      sprint corporate
      Hello! Very interesting topic, thank you raised it

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      • #6
        Really enjoyed this TS! Just lovely.

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