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    INVASION OF PRIVACY

    My privet parts are behind my eyes
    Between my ears
    No one sees
    No one hears
    Don’t come spying
    Like a private eye or some shrink prying
    Examining the feelings of this man
    Turning open my brain like removing the lid off a soup can
    Prying because you want to understand
    My private parts once toasted
    As a fiery youth I ignorantly boasted
    With age I became erect but scarred
    Now my exterior walls are posted
    Next to the doors and windows I had bared
    PRIVATE PROPERTY
    NO TRESSPASSING
    Violators will be prosecuted hard

    RDS
    THE SECOND











  • #2
    It took me a while to discern the full scope of the end-of-line rhyme scheme. That's a good thing, because it means that the rhyme must be flowing.

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      I hope it flowed for you Grant Thank You

  • #3
    I LOVE this.

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      Thank you much Suz-zen
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