Differing Locales

[EventHorizon]

Differing Locales


All of us reside
In separate domiciles

We glide quietly
Through our thoughts

That shimmer
Like gray mist and are gone

In spring night sky
Stars awaken their sleepers

Yellow lanterns that
Offer to guide our dreams

The night cricket
Sings about his lost lover

[Suz-zen]

We glide quietly-
read aloud a lyrical soothing feel and sound.

Nicely done EventHorizon

[Parkinsonspoet]

yes i agree reads very smoothly

[RhymeLovingWriter]

This is a great piece. I love how it takes where you are and brings it into the zone. We are spread all around the world, yet it feels like many of our circumstances yield similar emotions and poetry making.

[lunar glide]

when poets write about science its usually exaggerated/dangerous reasoning, but you treat quantum with the right sense of wonder and humility.