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  • Chasing the Shadow

    I'm chasing shadows
    by the light of the day
    My back to the sun
    And my face to the grey
    The shadows stretch on
    As I begin to fade
    But soon the sun will set
    And we'll all go away

    I'm chasing shadows
    In the dark of the night
    Where the cold wind howls
    And the sounds afright
    The shadows are gone
    Hidden from my sight
    And I am left alone
    Remembering light

  • #2
    Haunting, dreamlike, in good strong English - excellent blend.

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    • #3
      This poem feels like a journey when I read, darkness/light, and the in-between of shadow all the while. It pleases the ear BiocideJ - and it is good to see you posting once again!

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      • #4
        I love the whole piece BiocideJ! Especially S1 L5 & L6
        and S2 L5-L8. Super like! πŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌ

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