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    Vessel of love


    From night so intense
    Rose plucked reverence
    My whole being lay
    Love spliced DNA

    Body is wonder
    Form new life tender
    Create miracle
    An innocent soul

    Holding in my arms
    My babys eyes charm
    Love is always bliss
    To heir mothers kiss

  • #2
    love spliced DNA! wow PP. bulls eye

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    • Parkinsonspoet
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      Thank you was going for bullseye

  • #3
    I liked the same phrasing 'love spliced DNA'.

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    • #4
      PP, There is a hell of a lot of tightness in this Creation of Life poem. So many mysteries happen beyond us, and when you think of the exquisite machinery of life that has evolved over
      billions of years, the bonus is definitely love spliced DNA. Lovely write!

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      • #5
        your book arrives on monday! can't wait

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        • Parkinsonspoet
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          Thank you I really appreciate your support in buying the book

      • #6
        Just saw this. What a perfect tribute to a new born child

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        • Parkinsonspoet
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          Thank you it is thanks to LG it has resurfaced

      • #7
        How did I miss this? Just a little while away and so much new material! Nicely done Jon - this ode to new life.

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