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  • If I Could be a Poem with You

    I’d rise before the early birds
    and douse my verse with morning dew.
    This poet’s dawn awash with words
    if I could be a poem with you.

    I’d flee the dark, come into sight,
    embrace my day, my light, anew.
    Then I would bear again the night
    if I could be a poem with you.

    With pen I’d verse my every dream
    in hope, just one, becoming true.
    I’d lay these dreams weighed ream on ream
    if I could be a poem with you.

    If true, a heart, won with a song,
    would then the likes of me come through?
    I’d sing the night, the whole day long
    if I could be a poem with you.


  • #2
    A perfectly lyrical gem that would surely delight any beloved.

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    • Tony Grannell
      Tony Grannell commented
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      Hello grant, Thank you very much for the lovely response, most kind of you, indeed. Regards, Tony.

  • #3
    So touching and elegant! I love this, Tony!

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    • Tony Grannell
      Tony Grannell commented
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      Hello N.Y. Sonnet, I am most pleased that you have enjoyed this one and I do thank you so very much for your kind response. Regards, Tony.

  • #4
    The object of your affection is blushing with pride Tony. Bottoms Up!

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    • Tony Grannell
      Tony Grannell commented
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      Hello Bobby, I'm blushing myself - ha ha! Very kind of you to read and respond and it is very much appreciated. Chin-chin!.

  • #5
    oh my Tony! the kind and friendly beauty of your words shines through !!! simply gorgeous

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    • Tony Grannell
      Tony Grannell commented
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      Hello lunar glide, I am delighted you found this one gorgeous and your response is lovely and very much appreciated. Regards, Tony.

  • #6
    I'm chiming in too, Tony. Beautiful and I'm sure your beloved is swooning.

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    • Tony Grannell
      Tony Grannell commented
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      Hello AlexandratheLate, Do please, chime away. I do thank you very much for your beautiful response. Regards, Tony.

  • #7
    I feel like this poem. Thank you Tony - what a gift!

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    • Tony Grannell
      Tony Grannell commented
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      Hello RhymeLovingWriter, And a gift it is, surely and you are very welcome. Thank you very much, you are always so kind. Regards, Tony.

  • #8
    Utterly charming and I'm charmed too, just reading it.

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    • Tony Grannell
      Tony Grannell commented
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      Hello Karen, Charmed indeed. Sure where would we be without charm. Thank you very much, a lovely response. Regards, Tony.

  • #9
    A lyrically romantic piece!

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    • Tony Grannell
      Tony Grannell commented
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      Hello Dwayne, I do thank you very much for your fine response, kind of you, indeed. Regards, Tony.

  • #10
    Brilliantly beautiful, as always!

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    • Tony Grannell
      Tony Grannell commented
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      Hello Anatoliy, Delighted you found this one beautiful and I do thank you so very much. You are a kind soul. Regards, Tony.

  • #11
    you, my poet friend, are the real deal!! love this!

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    • Tony Grannell
      Tony Grannell commented
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      Hello Suz-zen, I am so happy that you love this one and I do thank you so very much for reading and responding, most kind of you, indeed. Regards, Tony.
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