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  • I can't "Even" tie my "Uneven" Shoes

    I can’t "Even" tie my "Uneven" Shoes,
    it Might be Considered a Song of the Blues.
    but it is a Line that Stuck in the Head,
    while Waking from Dreams in my Comfy Bed.

    It also Involved importing a Car,
    from Russia no Less and Better by Far.
    I have No Idea what this All Means,
    except that I’m Sorry I ate those Baked Beans.


  • #2
    Hahahahahaha, zesta!

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    • #3
      I lay awake - in the middle of the night thinking that I had to remember that line - then I got up to write the rhyme so I could go back to sleep.

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      • #4
        That is the sign of a true poet, Bob.

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        • #5
          I appreciate that but I am just a Rhymer.

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          • RhymeLovingWriter
            RhymeLovingWriter commented
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            There is no such thing as being 'just' anything Bob! You have a unique style and voice which sings joy into all hearts who read your work. Your ability to take the ordinary - and often banal - and write them into pieces at which we smile and/or chuckle aloud - is like magic - and I, for one, am very grateful you grace us with these many slices of life told in humorous fashion! Carry on man, carry on!

        • #6
          That is most appreciated - sometimes I think my humor is a little warped?

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          • #7
            I think all the best humour is a little warped, Bob! And yours is certainly among the best.

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            • #8
              Thank you!!!!!

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