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    Now what you expected
    No recognizable geographical landmarks
    Or physical location

    You hear familiar voices of departed kin
    That flood over you
    Like ocean waves of blinding light

    Your body has become immaterial
    Diaphanous and shimmering
    Your self is dissolving

    You feel eerie
    Your mind is letting go of thought
    Replaced with spirit

    Your consciousness has lost its moorings
    Is adrift and expanding
    Exponentially

    You have been transmogrified
    Into pure Light that now touches all things
    Since the dawn of creation

    You are everywhere
    In Ekstasis
    And understand the speech of Angels



  • #2
    I felt myself dissolve as I read this.... the last line....perfection Tanner

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    • #3
      Suz-zen, Many thanks for your gracious comments. This came to me verbatim and Tanner always thinks about tinkering, after the fact.

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      • #4
        A dream, inside a nightmare?
        Fluid. Ponderous. Tannerism.

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        • #5
          I am glad that you left it alone! The way this stanza sounds read to myself or aloud is at this moment my favorite: You hear familiar voices of departed kin
          That flood over you
          Like ocean waves of blinding light

          the 'F' sounds with the 'L' really works!
          The blinding with light afterward adds to the fluidity throughout.

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          • #6
            The multiverse is your ocean Tanner and you swim so gracefully. this poem brought me feelings of peace.

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            • #7
              lunar glide, the light of your moon is a fountain of grace in which I would bathe gladly and often. FYI, I wrote this as a vision of what might happen to us when we die.

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              • #8
                An incredibly relaxing read as if you are being talked into a state of relaxation; peace. Thank you.

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