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    whose, not mine;
    not why nor how: aspect ratio / aperspectival.

    yours, not mine, honorific,
    troll to leprechaun to clover;

    fights in the dark wood over
    math; who, not mine.

    suggest, thrice, masters.
    masters, masters: leaf-boat
    rocking it to sail toward
    peace;breed,she said, I listened.
    amphetos,
    haineigh, haneii.

    indian sword.
    gun fight in the ghetto / scar.
    nelly smoking New Ports
    while smiling darkly,
    and.or lustily.salacious.

    bug about my ways
    bug infestation
    severe fear of what?

    God's Word.

  • #2
    Amen Ora what do I say. You bring a talent here that is strictly you.Your word choices add so much colour leads me to think in the way I often do with Grants poems.

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    • #3
      I admit i was watching a cooking competition. I thought of your writing. When the judges were questioning " what is he doing? This is going to be a disaster!" and then he pulls off the experiment and they love it.

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      • #4
        great, kudos guys, i truly appreciate you <3

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        • #5
          I love how it ends with the fear of God's Word in italics. Anything with troll, leprechaun, and disowned fights in the dark wood over math has my attention. Bravura.

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