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    Day ebbs in glory
    Sunset fleeting
    before lunar delight

    Moons Monarchy
    Stars cosmic courtiers
    Who never usurp

    Majestic Moon
    Blood red beauty
    Or just a phase

  • #2
    I like the way the lunar majesty, deftly sketched, is suddenly put into question at the end - 'just a phase', like a teenager.

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    • RhymeLovingWriter
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      Oh yes - that struck me too! Clever - I like when that happens.

  • #3
    Me toooo. And the stars never usurp 😁

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    • #4
      its some sort of axiom, i hear, that the moon becomes darkest just before it is full... i wonderr where i heard that, or what it really means lol... goodjob, and a delicate, seamless little ditty. thanks!

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