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  • I Suffer

    Love is like a disease
    To contaminate
    And to burn away
    What matters inside

    Love is like a syringe
    Into the heart
    This life, it tears me apart
    Feelings I cannot hide
    Anymore

    I swear to god, I would never hurt you
    But why would you want to hurt me?
    Do you really love me, or despise me?
    It doesn't matter, you will see the last of me
    When this shit is over

    Darkness is all I can see
    When I'm with you
    The shadows never cease
    When I stay with you
    Darkness, I always feel
    When I'm beside you
    And for the pain you hand to me
    I will suffer for you
    But I won't die for you
    Because you never fucking cared


    Love hurts more it can mend
    A blackened soul
    Letting the blood flow
    Now tensions are high

    Love is nothing, it's a fake
    Petty lies to believe
    Crying hearts deceived
    And I suffer in this kind of life
    Every fucking time

    I swear to god, I would never hurt you
    But why would you want to hurt me?
    Do you really love me, or despise me?
    It doesn't matter, you will see the last of me
    When this shit is over
    When this life is over
    ~~~

    This is one of the pieces I was stuck at writing until I've now finally done it although, it may not be perfect. I am open to any changes to it but I would rather keep the level of profanity shown, to express the anger over a troubled relationship that this tells about.

  • #2
    show, instead of tell, is the advice I give.

    I felt the anger, that was nice. thanks for sharing...

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