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    Don't Try This at Home

    Then he had the thought
    Maybe I can do that
    It was most tragic

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    Sometimes It Isn't

    Sometimes it isn't
    You may think that it is, but,
    it really isn't

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    Stretch Carefully

    Don't stretch out too far
    or you may overbalance
    Then your goal will change

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    Snowflake

    A single snowflake
    falling silently towards earth
    landed on my nose

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    Originality

    No more can one find
    true originality
    It's all remixes

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    Don't Watch Over Me

    I'm concerned with the
    voyeurism of the dead
    What's wrong with heaven?

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    A Cold Mortality

    A stuffed head and chest
    is a vivid reminder
    breathing's important

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    Make Your Choice

    Choices to be made
    sometimes work when they're not
    but usually don't

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    Pretty Flowers

    Flowers are pretty
    But I have to say they are
    prettier with you
    Last edited by Muttado1sb; 02-23-2017, 10:47 PM.

  • #2
    Don't watch Over Me is funny

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    • Muttado1sb
      Muttado1sb commented
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      Thank you, imrogue! I mean, what's the point of a heaven if your eternal reward is to watch over those still living?
      Last edited by Muttado1sb; 02-25-2017, 10:29 AM.

  • #3
    Many likes. A Cold Mortality is where I've been living the past couple of weeks. Stretch Carefully is also good wisdom.

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    • Muttado1sb
      Muttado1sb commented
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      I feel you, RLW. It's been a rough few weeks here, too. Thanks!

  • #4
    Lovely, wry wit, Muttado. Lots of smiles.

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    • Muttado1sb
      Muttado1sb commented
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      Thank you, grant! I'm glad they brought smiles.

  • #5
    I think smiles are unniversal here

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    • Muttado1sb
      Muttado1sb commented
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      Thank you, Parkinsonspoet! I'm glad you thought so.

  • #6
    These are alll really good! Stretch carefully was my favorite ☺

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    • Muttado1sb
      Muttado1sb commented
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      Thank you, lunar glide! I'm glad you enjoyed them.
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